Comments for Ester
Sunday, October 4, 2015
11:20 AM
"It's not a joke" -> "the subject is real!".
Too fast!
"Both reps carry the same information" -> "both reps carry enough information".
I don't like the captions at the start of 010.mp4. I'm not sure if you're not mixing "knot" with "strand" or "lace", and anyway, I don't think it's the standard knot we use to tie our shoes. I'm not sure what you mean by "capture the knot".
In same, "why don't we want a strand to pass through itself"? Indeed why?
The colour coding at the beginning of 012.mp4 is not thermographic.
012.mp4-0:45: "from our viewpoint" -> "on our viewpoint".
The knot in the beginning of 013.mp4 is slightly open.
013.mp4-2:12: "proved" -> "proven".
013.mp4-2:30 is a bit confusing because it suggests that you can actually remove crossings. Right after: "how a crossing looks like" -> "what a crossing looks like".
015.mp4 is too fast. In general, 1-knots you can animate so they move faster than 2-knots, because 2-knots are less familiar and there's more to look at and digest.
131.avi has subtitles but no video.